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El Hormiga Loco
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PostSubject: General action and talk   General action and talk EmptySun Apr 15, 2012 12:07 am

Talking

Whenever one of the character talks, it begins with the talker's name followed up by a ":" and a space
When that character talks

For example
Spanky: Oh my gooooooood!!! He's busted open!!
JT: Somebody call in the medics, this is not looking good!!


Also make sure you do not put too much text at once, but divide it in several dialogue lines:

For example
EHL: Tonight ... I'm about to make history in this Federation!!
EHL: I'm not about to fight one opponent ... Or two ... Or three...
EHL: Noooooo!!! Tonight ... I will face the whole daaaaaaaamn roster!!!

As you see I spread it over 3 lines instead of putting it all in one

*** Be careful with swearing ... keep it all childfriendly please ***

Actions to make things clear

To make things more real, you should put in some text of what can be seen. This text should be between "*" in italic

For example

*Septic appears on the titantron ...*
*... not looking very happy.*

Septic: Listen up you morons!! I have had it with you all!!
Septic: Especially with you Schnitzel!!!
*The Schnitzel grins*
Septic: Wipe that smug grin off your face ... OR I WILL DO IT!!!



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PostSubject: Re: General action and talk   General action and talk EmptySun Apr 07, 2013 7:57 pm

In addition, too make the life of the VGM and myself easier, it's better not to use colours in here anymore for RP'ing.

A kind of conflict occurs when bringing it over to the game editor. So because of that, only use Bold and Italic.

Also we will drop the " double quotes. So just plain simple:

*Marabuntha storms in the Chairman's office*

Marabuntha: I'm out aheeeeeeeeeere!!
Chairman: Okay byebye ...
Marabuntha: You're not gonna stop me?
Chairman: Give me a good reason why?
Marabuntha: Euhm ...
Marabuntha: I got nothing man ...
Chairman: Well off you got then.
Marabuntha: Okay.

*Marabuntha leaves the scene, holding his rubber ducky and a hoople*
*fade to black*
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